Unit 9 LEQ Practice — Globalization and New Forms of Inequality
Master the AP World History LEQ on globalization and inequality after 1945: rubric-based thesis, contextualization, evidence, and reasoning strategies with a worked model.
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What this lesson covers
The Long Essay Question asks you to build a sustained historical argument from your own knowledge — no documents, no safety net. For Unit 9, a common prompt evaluates the extent to which globalization after 1945 created new forms of inequality. This lesson shows you how to convert everything you learned in Unit 9 into a response that earns all six rubric points.
Rather than re-teaching the content, we focus on the skill: writing a defensible thesis with a line of reasoning, setting up contextualization, deploying specific evidence, and using a historical reasoning process (comparison, causation, or continuity and change over time) to drive analysis. By the end you will know exactly what each rubric point rewards and how graders read your essay.
Rather than re-teaching the content, we focus on the skill: writing a defensible thesis with a line of reasoning, setting up contextualization, deploying specific evidence, and using a historical reasoning process (comparison, causation, or continuity and change over time) to drive analysis. By the end you will know exactly what each rubric point rewards and how graders read your essay.
How the 6-Point LEQ Rubric Works
The AP World LEQ is scored on six points across four categories. Knowing where points live tells you where to spend your time.
A frequent misconception is that a longer essay scores higher. It does not — a focused four-to-five paragraph essay that clearly hits each row beats a sprawling one. The thesis and contextualization points are the easiest to secure quickly, so lock them down in your introduction. The evidence and reasoning points require you to keep connecting facts back to your argument, not just list them.
Manage roughly 40 minutes: about 5 minutes planning, 30 writing, 5 checking. Because there is no document set, your recall of specific Unit 9 developments is the raw material for every point except the thesis structure itself.
| Category | Points | What earns it |
|---|---|---|
| Thesis / Claim | 1 | A defensible thesis that responds to the prompt with a line of reasoning |
| Contextualization | 1 | Broader historical setting relevant to the prompt |
| Evidence | 2 | 1 pt for two specific examples; 2 pts for using evidence to support an argument |
| Analysis & Reasoning | 2 | 1 pt for a reasoning process framing the argument; 2 pts for a complex, nuanced argument |
Manage roughly 40 minutes: about 5 minutes planning, 30 writing, 5 checking. Because there is no document set, your recall of specific Unit 9 developments is the raw material for every point except the thesis structure itself.
Writing a Defensible Thesis with a Line of Reasoning
The thesis point requires a claim that answers the prompt and previews your reasoning. "Extent to which" prompts invite you to take a position on degree, so avoid a flat yes or no. A strong thesis concedes something and then argues a dominant point.
Weak: "Globalization created a lot of inequality after 1945." This restates the prompt without a line of reasoning.
Strong: "Although globalization spread wealth and technology that raised living standards for some, it largely intensified inequality after 1945 by concentrating economic power in multinational corporations and wealthy nations while creating precarious labor and uneven access to health and technology in the developing world."
Notice the structure: a concession ("Although..."), a clear position ("largely intensified"), and two or three categories that become your body paragraphs. Those categories are your line of reasoning. The thesis can be one or two sentences and should sit in your introduction or conclusion. Do not bury it. Graders scan for a claim that is both defensible and specific to inequality after 1945 — a thesis about globalization in general, or one that ignores inequality, will not earn the point.
Weak: "Globalization created a lot of inequality after 1945." This restates the prompt without a line of reasoning.
Strong: "Although globalization spread wealth and technology that raised living standards for some, it largely intensified inequality after 1945 by concentrating economic power in multinational corporations and wealthy nations while creating precarious labor and uneven access to health and technology in the developing world."
Notice the structure: a concession ("Although..."), a clear position ("largely intensified"), and two or three categories that become your body paragraphs. Those categories are your line of reasoning. The thesis can be one or two sentences and should sit in your introduction or conclusion. Do not bury it. Graders scan for a claim that is both defensible and specific to inequality after 1945 — a thesis about globalization in general, or one that ignores inequality, will not earn the point.
Contextualization and Selecting Evidence
Contextualization asks for a broader historical situation relevant to the prompt — usually developments before or around the time period that set the stage. Devote two to four sentences at the start of your essay. For this prompt, good context includes the post-1945 order: decolonization producing many new nations, the Cold War dividing the globe, and the founding of institutions like the IMF, World Bank, and later the WTO that structured the global economy. Do not just mention a term — briefly explain how it connects.
For evidence, aim for at least three to four specific examples, more than the two the rubric minimally requires, so you have cushion. Draw from across Unit 9.
The second evidence point requires using these to support the argument, not listing them. After each fact, write a sentence explaining how it demonstrates a new form of inequality.
For evidence, aim for at least three to four specific examples, more than the two the rubric minimally requires, so you have cushion. Draw from across Unit 9.
| Theme | Usable specific evidence |
|---|---|
| Economic inequality | Multinational corporations, free-trade zones, structural adjustment programs, the Asian Tigers |
| Labor | Maquiladoras, outsourcing, export-processing zones, migrant labor |
| Technology gap | The digital divide, uneven internet access, the Green Revolution |
| Health disparity | HIV/AIDS impact in sub-Saharan Africa, uneven vaccine access |
Earning Both Analysis and Reasoning Points
The first reasoning point comes from framing your essay around a historical reasoning process. LEQ prompts pair with one process, but you choose how to structure it.
Causation: argue that globalization caused specific inequalities, distinguishing causes from effects. Continuity and change: show what forms of inequality were genuinely new after 1945 versus older patterns (colonial extraction, for instance) that persisted in new forms. Comparison: contrast how globalization affected different regions or groups.
The second point — complexity — is the hardest. Earn it by doing more than proving one side. Options include: acknowledging that globalization simultaneously reduced some inequalities (rising life expectancy, poverty reduction in East Asia) while creating others; explaining a nuanced relationship across multiple variables; or corroborating your argument with evidence from several regions. The safest route is a genuine, sustained concession paragraph that you then qualify, showing the relationship was uneven rather than uniform.
A common misconception is that adding the phrase "however" earns complexity. It does not — complexity must be developed throughout the essay, typically requiring a paragraph or several sentences that address counter-evidence and explain why your thesis still holds. Weave nuance into multiple paragraphs rather than tacking it on at the end.
Causation: argue that globalization caused specific inequalities, distinguishing causes from effects. Continuity and change: show what forms of inequality were genuinely new after 1945 versus older patterns (colonial extraction, for instance) that persisted in new forms. Comparison: contrast how globalization affected different regions or groups.
The second point — complexity — is the hardest. Earn it by doing more than proving one side. Options include: acknowledging that globalization simultaneously reduced some inequalities (rising life expectancy, poverty reduction in East Asia) while creating others; explaining a nuanced relationship across multiple variables; or corroborating your argument with evidence from several regions. The safest route is a genuine, sustained concession paragraph that you then qualify, showing the relationship was uneven rather than uniform.
A common misconception is that adding the phrase "however" earns complexity. It does not — complexity must be developed throughout the essay, typically requiring a paragraph or several sentences that address counter-evidence and explain why your thesis still holds. Weave nuance into multiple paragraphs rather than tacking it on at the end.
A Reusable Essay Blueprint
Use a consistent skeleton so you never freeze on exam day.
Introduction: two to four sentences of contextualization (post-1945 decolonization and Cold War economic order), then a thesis with a concession and two to three reasoning categories.
Body paragraph 1: your strongest category — economic concentration. Topic sentence tied to thesis, two specific pieces of evidence, and analysis linking them to new inequality.
Body paragraph 2: a second category — labor precarity or the technology/health divide. Same structure.
Body paragraph 3 (complexity): the counterargument that globalization reduced some inequalities, with evidence, then a qualification explaining why inequality still dominated or took new forms.
Conclusion: optional but useful for restating the thesis and clinching complexity.
Every body paragraph should end by answering "so what?" — how does this evidence prove the extent claim in your thesis? Graders reward argument, not narrative. If a sentence only tells a story without connecting to inequality, cut or revise it. This blueprint guarantees you address all four rubric rows in order, making your points easy for a reader to find under time pressure.
Introduction: two to four sentences of contextualization (post-1945 decolonization and Cold War economic order), then a thesis with a concession and two to three reasoning categories.
Body paragraph 1: your strongest category — economic concentration. Topic sentence tied to thesis, two specific pieces of evidence, and analysis linking them to new inequality.
Body paragraph 2: a second category — labor precarity or the technology/health divide. Same structure.
Body paragraph 3 (complexity): the counterargument that globalization reduced some inequalities, with evidence, then a qualification explaining why inequality still dominated or took new forms.
Conclusion: optional but useful for restating the thesis and clinching complexity.
Every body paragraph should end by answering "so what?" — how does this evidence prove the extent claim in your thesis? Graders reward argument, not narrative. If a sentence only tells a story without connecting to inequality, cut or revise it. This blueprint guarantees you address all four rubric rows in order, making your points easy for a reader to find under time pressure.
Key terms
- Defensible thesis.
- A claim that responds directly to the prompt, takes an evaluative position, and previews a line of reasoning; required for the thesis point.
- Line of reasoning.
- The logical structure connecting your thesis to your body paragraphs, usually a set of categories or causes that organize the argument.
- Contextualization.
- A broader historical setting relevant to the prompt, explained (not just named) in a few sentences, earning one rubric point.
- Complexity (complex understanding).
- The second analysis point, earned by developing nuance such as acknowledging both continuity and change, multiple causes, or a sustained qualified counterargument.
- Structural adjustment programs.
- Loan conditions imposed by institutions like the IMF requiring privatization and cuts, often cited as deepening inequality in developing nations.
- Digital divide.
- The gap in access to computing and internet technology between wealthy and poorer populations, a new form of post-1945 inequality.
- Maquiladoras.
- Foreign-owned assembly factories, often in Mexico near the U.S. border, that exemplify globalized low-wage labor patterns.
- Historical reasoning process.
- Causation, comparison, or continuity and change over time — the analytical lens that frames an LEQ and earns the first reasoning point.
Worked example
Evaluate the extent to which globalization created new forms of economic inequality in the period after 1945.
Step 1 — Plan (5 min). Decide position: globalization largely created new inequality but also reduced some. Choose causation as the reasoning process. Pick categories: economic concentration in multinationals/wealthy nations, and labor precarity. Reserve a concession about poverty reduction in East Asia for complexity.
Step 2 — Contextualize. Open with the post-1945 order: decolonization created dozens of new nations seeking development, while Bretton Woods institutions (IMF, World Bank) and later the WTO structured a global capitalist economy dominated by industrialized states. This sets the stage for why globalization's benefits spread unevenly.
Step 3 — Thesis. "Although globalization lifted millions out of poverty in industrializing regions like East Asia, it largely produced new forms of inequality after 1945 by concentrating capital in multinational corporations and wealthy nations and by generating precarious low-wage labor across the developing world."
Step 4 — Body 1 (economic concentration). Evidence: multinational corporations relocating profits, structural adjustment programs forcing austerity on indebted nations. Analysis: these mechanisms channeled wealth upward and northward, a new inequality distinct from direct colonial rule.
Step 5 — Body 2 (labor). Evidence: maquiladoras and export-processing zones, outsourcing of manufacturing. Analysis: created dependent, low-wage workforces, widening gaps within and between nations.
Step 6 — Complexity. Concede the Asian Tigers and China's export-driven growth reduced absolute poverty, then qualify: even there, rising internal inequality and reliance on Northern markets show inequality shifted form rather than disappeared. This sustained qualification earns the complexity point.
Step 7 — Check that each paragraph connects evidence to the thesis's 'extent' claim.
Step 2 — Contextualize. Open with the post-1945 order: decolonization created dozens of new nations seeking development, while Bretton Woods institutions (IMF, World Bank) and later the WTO structured a global capitalist economy dominated by industrialized states. This sets the stage for why globalization's benefits spread unevenly.
Step 3 — Thesis. "Although globalization lifted millions out of poverty in industrializing regions like East Asia, it largely produced new forms of inequality after 1945 by concentrating capital in multinational corporations and wealthy nations and by generating precarious low-wage labor across the developing world."
Step 4 — Body 1 (economic concentration). Evidence: multinational corporations relocating profits, structural adjustment programs forcing austerity on indebted nations. Analysis: these mechanisms channeled wealth upward and northward, a new inequality distinct from direct colonial rule.
Step 5 — Body 2 (labor). Evidence: maquiladoras and export-processing zones, outsourcing of manufacturing. Analysis: created dependent, low-wage workforces, widening gaps within and between nations.
Step 6 — Complexity. Concede the Asian Tigers and China's export-driven growth reduced absolute poverty, then qualify: even there, rising internal inequality and reliance on Northern markets show inequality shifted form rather than disappeared. This sustained qualification earns the complexity point.
Step 7 — Check that each paragraph connects evidence to the thesis's 'extent' claim.
Practice questions
On the AP World LEQ rubric, which combination correctly describes how the two evidence points are earned?
- One point for a thesis and one point for context
- One point for identifying two specific examples and a second point for using evidence to support an argument
- One point for each body paragraph regardless of content
- Two points automatically for writing more than four paragraphs
Answer: One point for identifying two specific examples and a second point for using evidence to support an argument
The evidence category awards one point for providing at least two specific, relevant historical examples and a second, higher point for using that evidence to support an argument in response to the prompt. Length alone earns nothing, and thesis and context are scored in separate categories.
Explain one effective strategy a student could use to earn the complexity (second analysis) point on a globalization-and-inequality LEQ, and give a concrete example of evidence that supports it.
Answer: A strong strategy is to develop a sustained qualified counterargument: acknowledge that globalization reduced some inequalities while arguing it created new ones.
Complexity requires more than a token 'however.' A student could argue globalization largely deepened inequality but concede that export-led growth among the Asian Tigers and in China lifted hundreds of millions out of absolute poverty. The student then qualifies this by noting that internal inequality within these economies rose sharply, showing inequality changed form rather than vanished. Developing this nuance across a paragraph, with specific evidence, demonstrates the complex understanding the rubric rewards.
Which of the following opening sentences best satisfies the contextualization point for a prompt on globalization and inequality after 1945?
- Globalization is when the world becomes more connected through trade and technology.
- After 1945, decolonization produced dozens of new nations while Bretton Woods institutions such as the IMF and World Bank structured a global economy dominated by industrialized states, shaping how globalization's benefits were distributed.
- Inequality has always existed throughout human history in every society.
- This essay will argue that globalization created new forms of inequality.
Answer: After 1945, decolonization produced dozens of new nations while Bretton Woods institutions such as the IMF and World Bank structured a global economy dominated by industrialized states, shaping how globalization's benefits were distributed.
Contextualization requires a specific, relevant broader setting that is explained and connected to the prompt. This choice situates the topic in decolonization and postwar economic institutions and links them to uneven distribution. The definition is too vague, the 'always existed' statement is a generic truism, and the last sentence is a thesis rather than context.
FAQ
- How long should my AP World LEQ be?
- There is no required length, but a focused four-to-five paragraph essay of roughly 500 to 700 words typically has room to hit every rubric row. Quality of argument matters far more than word count; a clear thesis, explained context, several well-used pieces of evidence, and developed complexity beat a long narrative.
- Do I need outside evidence like the DBQ requires?
- The LEQ has no documents at all, so every piece of evidence comes from your own knowledge. You need at least two specific, relevant historical examples for the first evidence point and should use them to support your argument for the second. Aim for three or four to be safe.
- What is the difference between the thesis point and the complexity point?
- The thesis point rewards a single defensible claim with a line of reasoning, usually stated in your introduction. The complexity point rewards nuance developed throughout the essay — acknowledging counter-evidence, addressing multiple causes or regions, or explaining continuity and change. You can have a strong thesis and still miss complexity if your argument only proves one side.
- How much time should I spend on the LEQ?
- On the exam you choose one LEQ and have about 40 minutes. Spend roughly 5 minutes planning your thesis and evidence, about 30 minutes writing, and 5 minutes reviewing that each rubric row is clearly addressed. Planning prevents the disorganized essays that lose evidence and reasoning points.
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